Torture device by another name

3:39 a.m. on April 16, 2012 (EDT)
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Flutter, flap, and warp.

My tent and wind conspire

To steal all my sleep.

9:30 a.m. on April 17, 2012 (EDT)
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who me - looks like you have an extra syllable in the last line there.

7:54 a.m. on April 23, 2012 (EDT)
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What can I say, I have an extra finger on one hand!  Well I'll have to re-draft this one:

Flutter, flap, and warp.

My tent and wind conspire

To steal all my sleep.

7:07 p.m. on April 23, 2012 (EDT)
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Ed- I've updated your text and deleted the duplicate entry.

5:17 p.m. on April 26, 2012 (EDT)
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Very true.  could have been called 'why people dig snow caves.' 

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