Kelty Children's Pack, Tour 1.0

11:27 p.m. on April 17, 2012 (EDT)
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'Tis better to ride

Through the forest eyes anew

Life springs forth around

9:39 a.m. on April 18, 2012 (EDT)
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Hi KickyFeet!  It looks like your last line has too many syllables.

11:30 a.m. on April 18, 2012 (EDT)
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Oops... you're right, "all" is not supposed to be in there.  And I can't seem to figure out how to get my spacing fixed?

11:32 a.m. on April 18, 2012 (EDT)
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It is supposed to read:

 

'Tis better to ride

Through the forest eyes anew

Life springs forth around

12:03 p.m. on April 18, 2012 (EDT)
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