R they supposed to rhyme?

9:57 a.m. on April 2, 2012 (EDT)
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Marmot, the north face Backcountry and Trailspace I'm in the right place

11:35 a.m. on April 2, 2012 (EDT)
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Hi MoZee - Haiku can rhyme, but they certainly don't have to.

Your haiku:

Marmot, the north face

Backcountry and Trailspace

I'm in the right place

Is missing a syllable in the middle line, which is 6 syllables and needs to be 7.

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