losing weight

3:37 p.m. on April 19, 2012 (EDT)
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enlightened by lite released at last burdens gone miles fly quickly by

3:52 p.m. on April 19, 2012 (EDT)
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Hi Turboherb - without breaks between the phrases, it's impossible to tell if this haiku abides by the rules of the contest. you can edit and reformat it if you'd like.

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